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My essay was corrected by Puan Hashimah

I steal this idea on aiman z pro’s blog…he wrote his amazing essay dat was corrected by his teacher when he was a 15 years old kiddo on his blog… I think I wont write that kind of essay until I kick da pail..HAHA..just imagine..he got 49/50…

What a silly mark..

Attention please…!! Those who say I am proud of my mark,yes I am..

It takes long time to get this mark you know doggg???

I have tried to get this mark before,but I failed

S0.u can own ur fucking business if u don’t wanna read my essay

Up to me lah..its my blog

HAHA

I wrote this essay for my final exam last year.. I had to write a essay and started my essay with these sentences.. ’if I were given three wishes, what would they be??’

HAHA…it sounds a quite nonsense question but believe me rabbit,I love it..HAHA

Read my essay and laugh badly.. HAHAHA

If I were given three wishes ,what would they be? Without wasting time and thinking wisely ,I would like to be a rich boy. It is my first wish. I would like to be a rich boy because I can get whatever I want even an expensive car and motorcycle. If I get this chance ,I am the most ecstatic boy in this harmony world. If I have a lot of money, I want to spend half of my money on my studies. I want to achieve success and succeed in my life.

Well, there are many people say that money is everything. Everything in this world needs money. I want to spend some of my money by buying (to buy) a big and high power motorcycle. I will use this bike to go to school if I am against the clock. Maybe it is just a nonsense speaking but at least I am not day-dreaming. Frankly speaking, I come from poor family and I cannot get whatever I want like others. So, that is why I’m asking to be a richy rich boy as my first wish.

My second wish is, I want to be a famous and good footballer. Maybe like Cristiano Ronaldo or Lionel Messi. Why do I ask this? It is because I like and love playing football. I heart this game. It is a rough game. Football is apart of my life. I cannot survive without football. God willings,I will train harder to be a good footballer.

Besides, I want to help our national football team to play in world cup. That is why I want to be a good and best footballer on the earth. As you know, our national football team is in bad and critical condition right now. Pity them. If I were given a chance to be national footballer, I will try my best to help Malaysia football team... you know what? Our country is an implementing country but there is no use if we are still behind in football game.. come on,we need to do something to cure this situation.

My last wish is to be da smartest person in the world. Smarter than Adi Putra and Bill Gates. Like I said before, our country is an implementing country. Because of that I want to be da smartest kid in the world to help this country to be the biggest power in the world.

I will make this country as a big country and has a power over all countries ind the world.. my last wish is (quite) nonsense because God has given us with our own specialities( ) . but I am still waiting for miracle. Moreover, my ambition is want to be a doctor. So, in order to achieve my dream, I need to be a smart student. An extraordinary student. I want to make my parents proud of me.

Lastly,I hope my all wishes will become true and reality. I am hoping for it. I am not asking for nonsense and silly things. I just want to make my life better than before. There is no harm to improve in our lives right??

Perghhh,..im very damn tired..it was my essay… its funny aite?

HAHA.. I laughed loudly and badly when I handed this paper to Madam Hashimah..HAHA…

I only managed to get 45/50…still cant beat you aiman zpro..

My total marks for English paper 2 is 76/85

Still a lot to improve

I didn’t tell my friends when they asked bout my marks

When they asked’berape markah ag??’

I told them ‘C’

Teacher Hashimah was smiling at me

See? I write this on my blog because I know no one will read my blog..

If u are da one who read my blog,congrats..HAHA

I am not showing off my marks

Sharing is caring aite??

Don’t get me wrong please?

p/s:please drop your comments if I made mistakes on that essay 

Thank for reading this silly essay..HAHA

I used to use broken English,that’s why I cant manage to get a good mark for my English 

Sometimes, we need to create a fake story and fake idea when writing essays

It’ll help us to get a better mark

( )=Bracket means it was corrected 